맛없는 맛집
하지만 TV 속 대박 맛집을 찾아가면 실망하는 경우가 허다하다. ‘진짜 맛집’은 애당초 한정돼 있다. 현재 지상파 방송 3사에선 10여 개의 맛집 프로그램이 있다. 한 프로그램에서 한 주에 5개 식당만 소개해도 1년이면 8000개 이상 새로 탄생한다. 지금까지 거쳐간 맛집까지 합치면 그 수를 헤아리기조차 힘들다. 그 많은 맛집이 식도락(食道樂) 예찬을 받을 만할까.내가 한 영작
More often than not, however, people ⓐget disappointed ⓑwhen they visit famous restaurants introduced by television. In reality, ⓒgenuine gourmet restaurants are limited in numbers. At present, ⓓhowever, three network television stations broadcast over 10 programs ⓔon famous restaurants respectively. If each of them introduces five restaurants per week, ⓕover 8,000 new-born famous restaurants come into being each year. The number grows up enormously if restaurants that went through airwaves so far are added to that. Then, are the countless so-called famous restaurants good enough to be called gourmet restaurants?
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More often than not, however, people ⓐare disappointed ⓑwhen visiting the restaurants shown on television. In reality, ⓒreally good restaurants are rare. At present, ⓓthough, three network television stations broadcast over 10 programs ⓔfocused on restaurants. If each program introduces five restaurants per week, ⓕover 780 restaurants are shown each year. So the question is, do these so-called famous restaurants deserve such praise?
Writing Tip
ⓐ get disappointed → are disappointed
ⓑ when they visit famous restaurants introduced by television → when visiting the restaurants shown on television → 내용상 원래 유명한 식당이 아니라 텔레비전에 나와 유명해진 것임, 텔레비전에 소개된 식당에 한정 되므로 정관사 첨가
ⓒ genuine gourmet restaurants are limited in numbers → really good restaurants are rare gourmet restaurant은 특별하거나 고급스러운 식당을 말하는데 내용상 반드시 그런 식당만을 언급하는 것은 아님
ⓓ however → though
ⓔ on famous restaurants respectively → focused on restaurants 이미 유명한 식당을 소개하는 프로그램이 아님
ⓕ over 8,000 new-born famous restaurants come into being each year. The number grows up enormously if restaurants that went through airwaves so far are added to that. Then, are the countless so-called famous restaurants good enough to be called gourmet restaurants? → over 780 restaurants are shown each year. So the question is, do these so-called famous restaurants deserve such praise? 간략하게 수정, 수치는 정확하게 표현, 3개의 방송사에 각각 10개의 프로그램을 일 주일에 5회 방영하면 일년은 52주이므로 이 숫자들을 모두 곱하면 800이 아니라 780이 됨
음식점과 방송국, 협찬 대행사, 외주 제작사, 브로커가 결탁하는 시스템을 고발한다. 일당을 받는 가짜 손님도 있다고 한다.
내가 한 영작
It openly ⓐaccuses that the famous restaurant programs are the product of collusion ⓑamong restaurant owners, broadcasting stations, advertisement agents, subcontractors and brokers. It even claims that ⓒextras disguised as customers appear in such programs.
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The True-Taste Show ⓐreveals the restaurant programs to be frauds by uncovering collusion ⓑbetween restaurant owners, broadcasting stations, advertisement agents, subcontractors and brokers. It even claims that ⓒactors and actresses feigning as customers appear in such programs.
Writing Tip
ⓐ accuses → reveals 비난한다기 보다 드러내어 알리는 것임
ⓑ among → between among은 셋 이상 사이의 관계를 표현하나 셋이 넘는 숫자라고 무조건 among을 쓰는 것이 아니라 셋 이상의 대상이 있어도 관계는 둘씩 맺을 때는 between을 써야함
ⓒ extras disguised as customers → actors and actresses feigning as customers 엑스트라가 아니라 실제로 인터뷰도 하는 배우라고 보아야 함
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